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PassionatelyRomantic
Member

since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-02-03 06:39 PM

My lust is but a divine snowflake,
precariously adrift in perpetuous flight.
Conducted by Mother Nature's course,
whom makes my world so bright!

[This message has been edited by PassionatelyRomantic (02-03-2004 09:08 PM).]

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-03 08:58 PM

Nice poem. Did you spell "percariously" and "pirpetuous" wrong on purpose? Grover.

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2004-02-04 11:57 PM

perhaps one day it will light upon the eyelash of that special person

paper_cuts_broken_hearts
New Member

since 2004-02-04

Posts 2

3 posted 2004-02-05 05:35 AM

yeah i liked the simplicity of it, but it had depth, very nice write

i very much enjoy reading short stuff like this

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2004-02-05 07:09 AM

Passion and romance..name suits you well!

~ARH

love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-02-05 03:00 PM

Jared~
You drew the word-imagery perfectly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-22 09:50 PM

nice

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