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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2004-01-31 11:59 PM


Hope You Understand

Oak-oh, a sound from my mailbox,
I received another email from you.
I know at these time of the year,
You need solace from a friend.

Yet I can only read your mails,
For I can't give the love you want.
And I'm not to judge you or whoever,
For I think of you as a friend.

Many nice words from your poetry,
Yet more solemn words spoken through it.
I read them all through your emails,
Yet in my heart you're a nice girl.

Sometimes I do seem out of touch,
Yet I hope you know I missed you.
The friendship is alive,
Because physical distance
Makes no different to us.

I hope you would finally understand
That I enjoy conversing with you.
Phoning or not, it makes no different.
But when you think I don't care, it hurts.

And I just want you to know
(Your secrets are safe with me.)

(c)Jan 31, 2004
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2004 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
pegasus111
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1 posted 2004-02-01 11:26 AM


mysterious piece. Very personal I would think. I have more questions than answers...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Michelle_loves_Mike
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2 posted 2004-02-01 11:42 AM


I hope the intended enjoys this poem as much as I did
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-02-01 01:14 PM


Eliza~
I would agree with the Pegger ... mysterious indeed ... and remarkable that you so poetically speak your mind~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2004-02-22 09:56 PM


wow...love the ending
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