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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2004-01-31 11:52 PM

Keep Your Strength

When you're in pain, you can't see light.
Every breath is like a bowl of sour soup.
Yet soon before you notice for yourself,
The sky will be clear, and snow
Which usually gives a sense of cold
Will clear your footprints of yesterday.
And the white snow will bring you a hug,
A hug from friends, who truly care for you.
And then, you will feel cold no more.

(c)Jan 31, 2004
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2004-02-01 11:27 AM

ahhh.. I liked this little gem..nicely done.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-02-02 09:09 PM

Nice poem. Grover.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2004-02-02 11:33 PM

Friends are a priceless gift!

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2004-02-02 11:55 PM

This is a very sweet poem. Snow clearing away the yesterdays. Nice. Joyce

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2004-02-03 04:39 AM

This is lovely Eliza,
you have such a beautiful soul.

hugs from june xxxxxxxxxx

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2004-02-07 05:06 PM

(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is precious, sweet friend, I never thought of snow that way but it truly can dust off the footprints and mnake the path all smooth like velvet again, yay, God Bless You, I'm blessed to be your friend forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

7 posted 2004-02-08 09:03 AM

and you know ... it really does happen, just as you've described

wonderful thoughts

Isobel
Senior Member

since 2004-01-17

Posts 529
Qld, Australia

8 posted 2004-02-09 01:06 AM

Eliza

I really liked this poem. Friendship means not being alone. That in itself gives you strength.

Isobel

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

9 posted 2004-02-09 08:29 AM

My best friend is the only person I have had and will always have...friendship is sometimes the best thing in life.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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10 posted 2004-02-22 09:10 PM

thanks

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