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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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re-written 2004 Sour Grapes I swallowed your syrup of sugared words you sweetened them to perfection. The bitter taste of emptiness concealed in your confection. I could have taken your deadly pill What gave you the right to lie ? Taking my all, then spitting it back did you expect me not to cry ? You should have ended it sooner your honey masked words were a waste For you left not a beautiful memory, Just a bitter sweet aftertaste |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Sad poem June. I hope this didn't really happen to you. Love, Joyce |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Ouch..  Not a single word wasted here. Short and bitter sweet.. Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^ |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Life can be cruel. I pray this has not deterred you from finding your true love and soul mate? Isobel |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
"A spoon full of sugar, helps the medicine go down" Unfortunatly, WHEN the sugar wears off, the bitter taste will come back to haunt you Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
June, Many can relate to this. I'm looking for the one I wrote about the little lie that grew up. Liars only fall into their own traps and they make you take a look at them so that you see them for what they really are. You are a sensitive writer (tender heart). Barb |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
awwww thank you all so much for your words. I am overwhelmed by the response to this one. hugs june xxxxxxxx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't I know this well? all too well |
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