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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Just Remember. A message has been sent through time To show the way things should be. Our lack of understanding is our crime And of what we dare not see. *Just remember that steel will eventually rust And concrete buildings shall fall. Man turns to dust While tide and time befall. Take from the land and all it has And give nothing back in return. The balance of life is affected, alas... Maybe there is a lesson to learn. *Just remember that steel will eventually rust And concrete buildings shall fall. Man turns to dust While tide and time befall. So poisoning our food resource Then ingesting it is mad. Suffering is our own discourse Of what we had good but turned bad. *Just remember that steel will eventually rust And concrete buildings shall fall. Man turns to dust While tide and time befall. Mother Earth shakes in fear And spews out in utter disgust At the life she sustains so dear, How could we betray her trust? *Just remember that steel will eventually rust And concrete buildings shall fall. Man turns to dust While tide and time befall. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Welcome! Good to read your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your poetry  |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Isobel: Welcome to Passions in Poetry! Good to see you posting here and such a moving poem! What you say in it, is all too true. Will look forward to reading more of your work. Best wishes Trillium Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions Isobel! Nice poem! Please check your email for a special Passion's welcome! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Passions In Poetry! This is a wonderful first post, I will be looking forward to reading more from you. Please enjoy our pages of blue and get to know us all. I think you will like it here! It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very cool. And Welcome! "sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.." |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i know i'll be remembering! great write! ~Welcome~ |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
Welcome indeed... many of us can relate to this one. I enjoyed the vision of song lyrics here. Can't wait to "sing" with you again. Shereen. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this makes for a great song |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Thank you all for encouraging me. You never know, it might make a great song? Love Isobel |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Isobel, I do like this. very true, i do like the poignancy too! Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Isobel. It may very well make a great song! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Moving, thought provoking... welcome to PIP! (I'm relatively new too) Grover. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Isobel~ Now am I ever glad that someone bumped your FIRST POST~ Oh ... what a wonderfully ponderous penning~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Thank you Midnightblues, Sunshine, Grover and Marge for your kind words of encouragement. Love Isobel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) God Bless You, dearest friend, sadly the world is corrupted by so many artificial forces and governments and soon I hope the capitalistic system collapses so we can be free of the madness and embrace nature again! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, yay, welcome to Passions, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Isobel, thank you for sharing!     May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Very lyrical and true! I can't wait to stumble across more of your work here Welcome to Passions ~BWA~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Isobel, I don't know how I missed this before. Very nice as are all of your works. Love, Joyce |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
yep, I just read it for the first time, too. Nice poem. Love, Barb |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
good poem welcome to pip... i'm new here too i'd love your opinion on my works Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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rainingwithsun Junior Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 19Toledo, Ohio USA |
Being the enviromentalist I am I just love this ever so true poem, nice work! -Scott |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Isobel~ Me miss YOU ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to Passions! Your words hold truth and are written well. |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Thank you Mistletoe Angel, Broken_Winged_Angel, Destinys_Fallen_Angel, rainingwithsun, iliana, Joyce, Beasley and Marge for your lovely comments. Marge, I miss you too. Love Isobel ox |
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