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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
The rose you gave me was in disguise I saw the truth in your brown eyes Pretending to be love's scarlet hue The rose you gave me was goodbye blue Accepting this gift and sweet kisses that lied Iagain retreated to the place where Ihide Taking a battered heart,that would never be fixed To a place where blue roses could never exist |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
June~ Such a sad write for such a lovely face~ Good to 'see' you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
glad to see your lovely picture and I enjoyed the sad poem. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: Enjoyed the poem and so good to see your pretty picture! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
THANKS EVERYONE !!! as for the picture ..... it only took me a year to work out how to upload it lol !!! hugs from here in the uk xxxxxxx june xxxxx |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is a neat poem. For a short poem, it's powerful and it says a lot. Barb |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
awwwww thanks barb, i tried to pack a lot of thoughts into a small space. glad you liked it. hugs from june xxxx |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
So sad. I felt like crying. It actually reminds me of the Neil Diamond song: "Song Sung Blue". |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sadly beautiful |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Open your heart up to the light as faith will bring blue crystal roses to the garden of your heart, sweet friend, I send many angel healing hugs your way and wish for love to forever grace your deserving heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear June, beauty always seem to be coupled with tragedy... feel it in this poem that you write... I like it, though Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Hi michelle, Its ages since our paths crossed on here but its lovely to see you and thank you for reading and enjoying my poems. hugs from june xxxxxx |
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