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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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January winds Frigid, indiscriminate Wind chimes shiver too! Hostile Artic front Assaults both body and soul Of man and machine Scraping is defied Frost clings to the windshield glass As my skin reddens 1-10-2004 [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (01-10-2004 07:12 PM).] |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
you made me shiver too !! great haiku ( or trio of ) one typo error on line five (assault) loved this one though. hugs from a cold english climate from june xx |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Brrrr Dennis...You are still the King of haiku! These are so well done as to make one shiver...the wind chill today here is 10 below..Spring is our only hope! ...P.U.Y.M.B. hugs Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely, Dennis. We have had our two days of winter here and are on the upswing towards spring. I hope. Joyce |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
June, Thanks for the kind words and sharp eye (I made the edit you suggested) Ellie, Thanks once again for the generous words (blushing). P.U.Y.M.S. Joyce, I envy you, I don't expect to see Spring until April (sigh...brrr) Moonbeams radiate |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Hi, my friend..they say " imitation is the highest form of flattery"...so..I did a little winters trilogy to compliment your own...I hope...P.U.Y.M.B. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ ALWAYS a pleasure to read you~ Today Florida felt the chill ... but at least it goes away quickly~  AND ... there are still roses in bloom in the rose garden~ Stay warm~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch...glad I'm in Florida |
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