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Beasley
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0 posted 2004-06-15 11:38 AM


The Key Lime Sky

One day while I was baking a pie
I stopped and looked way up high.
My limes all turned to dazzling blue
And the sky above to something new.
Key Lime was the sky. I was confused.
I turned on the TV waiting for news.
Then all of a sudden I had the crust
To think I’d gone daffy. That was a must.
Clouds started looking a lot like meringue
Then all of a sudden thunderheads sang.
After the storm, the sky turned blue.
Now about these limes, I haven’t a clue.

Barb Gedman

© Copyright 2004 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-06-15 12:04 PM


Barb~
I LOVE THE MERINGUE !

You are so cute~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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junemac
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2 posted 2004-06-15 03:17 PM


I love this one. It really made me smile and The title is a wow !!! So original, so good, . Well Done !!

hugs from June x

PatAngel
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3 posted 2004-06-27 01:10 PM


I also loved this poem! You always seem to make me smile.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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4 posted 2004-06-28 02:27 PM


Barb~
Was just making a lemon meringue pie
and thought of this cute little write
just HAD to come back
for another little byte~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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5 posted 2004-06-28 02:34 PM


Dear Barb;  I thought about this yesterday when the sky looked like it was full of meringue clouds! You have a wonderful imagination!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2004-06-28 04:39 PM


Pie in the sky.  Now if it would only rain.  Joyce
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7 posted 2004-07-07 05:06 AM


enjoyed
midnightblues
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8 posted 2004-07-07 10:45 AM


Awww yummy little piece of a poem

Love
MiCheLLe


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Isobel
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9 posted 2004-07-11 08:05 AM


Dear Barb

Imagination is the 'Key'.

Love Isobel ox


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