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A Hint of Wilderness |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA ![]() |
A Hint of Wilderness Beyond the sloping lawn and trees, Lies a lake that opens wide. There, geese who wander as they please, Search reed beds where the insects hide. The breeze that laves our house of logs, Is full of water scents and more. A hint of wilderness and bogs, That stretch far from our rustic door. I often think I'd like to go Exploring in the vast unknown, But here,I'm safe and warm and loved And I am lazy to the bone! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (12-28-2003 06:00 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely Betty. No need to wander when you already have it all. Love, Joyce |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Betty Lou! Thanks for the little experience of your world! I was due for a little hint of wildnerness in my brick and concrete jungle! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So cute... ![]() |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Thanks for reading. Hope all is well in your world! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: It's been 27 years since I have lived in a town of any kind and I wonder how it would be for me now! Some day I will probably have to move to the city, but I do love this country life. Thanks! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Terri: Thanks for reading and glad to hear you enjoyed it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Oh, Betty Lou! What a delightful read! Loved the twist! Thank you! ![]() Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
jc: Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed this poem! Happy New Year! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Betty Lou You painted a wonderful picture with your words and left me smiling at the end. I wish for you much love and happiness in the New Year. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Hi Sue: Thanks for taking time to read and comment. It's always so nice to hear from you. Happy New Year! Love, Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I like this! good imagery =) - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Hi Betty, You are so in touch with nature and feelings. This is a nice poem like all of the others, and the others, and the others, and the others..... Love, Barb Happy New Year! |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
River: Thanks for reading and happy to hear you enjoyed it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Hi Barb: Thanks for your nice comments and a Happy New Year to you too! Love, Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Simple, elegant, and brilliant! Can't get much better than that! Fine job We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Necro: Thank you for such great comments! I'm glad you liked this. Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet! |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows! Thanks for reading. Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
once again captured and wrmed by your words betty lou thank you for this one gave me so much pleasure in its imagery. hugs june x |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thanks junemac! Glad you enjoyed it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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