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God Spoke To Me The Other Day |
Denise
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God spoke to me the other day In quite an unexpected way Revealing to the depths of me That I create the misery Of soul whose shackles won’t let go Preventing purest love to flow To those about me most in need Of hope and peace, a planted seed, Of faith, at least, a future bloom To praise His name, dispel the gloom That permeates the wounded heart. His mercies grant a fresh new start, To be His eyes, His hands, His feet Along the way to those I meet. In quite an unexpected way, God spoke to me the other day. © 12/27/03 Denise Corbley Snyder |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
there is a power out there,,that stirs the cauldren of life, mixes fate and fantasy,,and reminds us everytime a mistakes takes us a wrong way,,,,,god? if thats the name you wish to give it,,,,,so be it. heating a voice of reason, a voice of concern,,,,pain at the sight of a wrong,,,,that is where "god" is,,,,,but,,,,,who listens,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awwwwww this is so sweet. I love it!!!!!! Very nice, and thanks for the reminder that things don't have to weigh so heavy on our hearts. Working my way back to Him! Love, Terri~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhDenise~ To close this beautiful season of *gifting* with such a lovely Sonnet from you is to awaken to the sight of Santa having REALLY filled the poetic stocking to the brim~ Love it ... and love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Really, really nice Denise. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (12-27-2003 06:45 PM).] |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: This is really a beautiful piece! Thanks for sharing it with us. happy New Year to you and your family! Love, Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Thank you, girls, glad you enjoyed it. It's the first poem I've written in about 2 years, it kind of surprised me when the words started coming...hope it's not another 2 years until the next one because I really enjoy writing, but I can't force it...it just doesn't seem to work that way for me. Oh well, thanks again for the feedback! Love and Hugs, Denise |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Denise... This is quite a lovely verse. I, too, hope that the creative urge strikes more often as you are very gifted. Thank you for sharing this with us. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
i like this =) God does move in mysterius ways. - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Denise, of God really spoke to you, I have little doubt His words would be "Well done!" You BETTER not make it another two years!!! |
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Denise
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Thank you, JC, James, River and Michael, for reading and for your lovely comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
so lovely Denise...a quote from a dear friend to me "in our brokeness we can still go and heal the hearts of others"..you write so beautifully...hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
Denise, you have found in this verse a fountain of answers that streams from the depths of your soul. Some may not be visible to you right now, but I believe they will be revealed in His time. Your fountain is what you will reveal through your written word - and therein lie the answers. Don't ever stop writing... even if only in your heart. Shereen. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is something to remember each day.... ~sky Hold on, if you feel like letting go |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Denise, this was a really good message! |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Such a lovely poem. I really enjoyed it. |
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Denise
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Thanks! Glad you all enjoyed reading it! |
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