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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Black Pearls I love you, Silently in your backseats. I glance with admiration, As you drive without disturbance. Yet your smile, Which shown through mirrors, Lights up my face, As my eyes blink- Because the shine is too strong. Without a word, As my mind dreams into your arms. Oh how I dearly wish This car ride will never end. My eyes blink All because the shine of my love, Is revelling, From my heart, through my eyes into yours- As a standing proof of my faith. (c)Dec 4, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons ~Every girl has a dream within. ~Yesterday insult, today gain. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (12-06-2003 11:54 PM).] |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Your voice in this is strong...the feeling is deep and with conviction. Well done. Sparticus |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Eliza, this is beautiful, sweet friend, such wonderful convictions of your love shine and I wish for them to endure from here on! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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