»
Archives
»
Corner Pub #2
»
Rhythm
| Corner Pub #2 |
|
Rhythm |
|
|
Astro Member
since 2003-01-08
Posts 69Ca. |
Rhythm Rhythm? Never had much use for it -- Maybe ‘cause I’m white. I am adept at using simple syllables, But I guess that isn’t right. I should pair words like alliterate With masturbate – sorry, Freudian slip, But the words are multi-syllabic And that makes my rhythm more hip. There’s the speaking voice, too. What I mean is, do I deliver the words With the passion of birds Who sing for the dawn’s red hue? Of course, that’s not the best example As birds are quite simple, and their song Is awkward and random. I should speak more like a jackhammer Whose tandem handles rock and sway With a rhythm that never gives way And I can pound my meaning into The mental ground of a nation weaned on Rhythm. Sight is an always awful beginning |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Luke Austin Donatello - All Rights Reserved | |||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, you sure got into the groove here, dearest friend, this would make a fabulous part of a hip-hop song, I love it, you got the music in you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Luke, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
