Wind and Rain Embracing Me

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Wind and Rain Embracing Me

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-11-30 06:21 PM

Wind and Rain Embracing Me

I adore the black lipstick,
The thick lipstick of your cupcake smile,
Sliding along
Your dark red velvet vest,
As your body
Echos the drum beats of the wind.

Green gloves of your hands,
Sealed with warm kisses to the wind,
Your hands move on mine, my body, the air.
Oh the wind, my body, was cold,
Yet as we embrace through your lipstick,
My body is enlightened with scent
Of your seem baked body.

Oh I want to bite your lips,
Because your lips are filled with cupcake scent.
As the lipstick soft to wind,
I blow a warm touch from my fingers,
Pressing on
Your seem baked body.

Fragile as you are,
You stand strong against my stormy takeover.
Shaking as a black rose beseeching for forgiveness,
You look all tired, knelled and sore.
My eyes drawn into the tunnel of yours,
As your body absorbs my sweat.

Note: The object of the poem is cupcake and black rose.

(c)Nov 25, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

1 posted 2003-11-30 07:39 PM

I love the layers of this, seduction and simple pleasure in the same poem. Well done my talented friend.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-11-30 10:21 PM

A rose is a rose and a cupcake is a cupcake, but not when you write about them. Joyce

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-12-01 04:06 AM

cool

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-12-01 09:00 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eliza, this is so well-written, sweet friend, I love the mannerism and abstract feel of this, very seductive! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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