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cusick
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0 posted 2003-11-29 04:24 PM



From the depths
I call your name
but the only sound is
the rapid bumping
of my heart
shattering the quiet
of my tomb like existence.

Warm in your arms,
shaking away half  
forgotten dreams
I glance at your beloved face
as  an imperceptive flash,
brighter than any day,
steels away my sight.

Falling, falling, absorbed
in utter blackness,
pain a mere irritation
then blackness....

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Sparticus
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1 posted 2003-11-29 07:07 PM


Very Passionate write...wonderful to always read you.


Sparticus

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some can sing
some can't

-Issa

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-11-29 08:24 PM


So sad...:'(
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-11-29 08:25 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Maggie, this is sad but sooooooo wonderfully written, sweet friend, God Bless You and may your heart soon beat like a music box happily, you are special, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
4 posted 2003-11-29 11:36 PM


Oh, Maggie...

What an intense verse...very well done. But, I sincerely hope this is not from first-hand knowledge.

Thank you.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-11-30 01:10 AM


I love the sad ones
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2005-06-24 01:56 PM


Maggie~
Where be you ????

'From the depths
I call your name'


Hope you get the email I sent~
Come home and visit us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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iliana
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7 posted 2005-07-15 12:47 PM


Gosh!  This tugs at the heart.  Good write!
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