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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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"the yellow of things" I always wanted to fly fly so high, ever so high reach out to the stars hold them in my palms and see them flicker like fireflies on and off, in yellow whispers and silent breaks I used to want to rule the world and all the grand tales of kings that were so right helped in their little ways all that of course changed like all the rest of things like dreams that come to an end that’s when I started wanting to fly so now I am climbing a cliff and when I reach the top of it I am going to jump off it and forget about the ground after all if I can fly, why should I fear landing but I am wearing a parachute for even champion rally drivers wear seat belts and I am only me one day, I will hold the stars right here in the centre of my palms caress them for a moment and try to figure out why they sparkle and even if I don’t, I will let them go for their shine is for the others too one day, this dream will end too but before that I shall visit the Corner Pub#2 like the yellow of things  sorry if this one troubled your sight... promise next time will be better... at least, I will try ... |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sudhir; Welcome back to Corner Pub and I like your poem. I always wanted to fly myself! I see you are in Belgium now. Hope it is a happy move for you and will look forward to seeing more of your work. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SudhirMyFriend~ Welcome back to Cell Block #2~  Visiting hours are Monday-Sunday ... 24/7~ Good to see you here with this charming penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling here as I understand this completely, even though I still have a fear of flying even when guaranteed a safe landing. LOL, so good to read this honest POV from one of our best poets. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A hearty welcome back. While you were flying, we have been here safely on the ground longing to join you. Love, Joyce |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
This is a wonderful piece that has a hint of surrealism with it... Much enjoyed. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I think it's a beautiful writing Sudhir. Told the tale of many wishes. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Dreams are what keep us going. Really enjoyed this, it was funny and inspirational. Maggie |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I will hold the stars right here in the centre of my palms caress them for a moment and try to figure out why they sparkle and even if I don’t, I will let them go ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wow... what an image. Well written! Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Hehehe, here you can gain even more confidence and determination in seeking your dreams as people like myself praise your efforts and ambitions, counseling is always applicable! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I'm so happy you're back, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
too good.... you all are too good... Thanks a lot Regards Sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Sudhir, I'm glad I stopped in here...I LOVE this poem! |
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