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cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-11-20 08:39 AM

Watchful.
Wakeful Ever fearful.
Talons drumming,
staying me from
the sanctuary
of unconsciousness.

Then dawns sweet paleness
soothes my hammering heart'
quelling the frantic claws.
Lulling the edges
of unreasonable fear.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2003-11-20 09:04 AM

The first stanza describes my state of mind during my recent turbulent plane ride.

The last stanza describes my state of mind when we landed safely!

Great poem, cusick!

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

2 posted 2003-11-20 01:15 PM

Denise I have had that flight and thought that I would never live to land. Maggie

Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

3 posted 2003-11-20 03:22 PM

Beautful ride, in a well written poem.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-11-20 04:33 PM

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful poem that shows the gift of comfort through adversity! (sigh) Know He will always make it clear sailing from here, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

5 posted 2003-11-20 04:39 PM

Sparticus I hav e visited you in Greece and you compare very well. Maggie

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

6 posted 2003-11-20 04:41 PM

Mystletoe how could anyone not love you. Maggie

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2003-11-21 12:01 PM

Maggie: Reminds me of a nightmare I had recently! Impressive write!

Betty Lou Hebert

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

8 posted 2003-11-21 02:16 AM

ooooooh written and described so well. i loved it in its entirity. thanks for sharing

hugs june x

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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9 posted 2003-11-21 04:43 AM

you said it perfect!

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

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10 posted 2003-11-21 05:48 AM

Thanks to Trllion, June and Shadow. Maggie

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

11 posted 2003-11-22 11:38 PM

Hi, Maggie...

Thank you for such a beautiful piece of art...however, I think I'm stuck in the first verse. Sure wish dawn would arrive...maybe tomorrow.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

12 posted 2003-11-23 11:06 AM

THANKS FOR REPLYING jAISIE

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