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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tiny Thought-A-Graphs ~*Marge Tindal*~ Hearts carouseling Chasing elusive brass ring Spinning dizzily~ Kaleidoscopic Rainbow’s glittering adorn Pot of gold seekers~ Dreams of our making Hold us in slumber of night Set us free at dawn~ Boys and girls giggle The beginnings of friendship Lasting a lifetime~ Generations’ hands Hold the past in the present What was … is again~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Well written, I do think. I like the cyclic nature of life, the one where generations cycle through their lifespans. Technology may change some things, but other such as friendship remain constant |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
You were absolutely right. I do love it. I especially like this: "Generations’ hands Hold the past in the present What was … is again" |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Very cleverly worded and presented! Just got back online a short time ago and happy to see poetry from you! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge Welll done,  |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful thoughts, Marge. Lovely morning ponder! |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
A beautiful string of haiku, love the feel and the seasonal references. Sparticus Even with insects- |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you never fail to amaze me, and make me think |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
exceptional ( as usual ) ...  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
your tiny though-a-graphs seem hugely wonderful to read to me regards sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you ALL so very much~ I like *snapshots of the heart ... and friends to share them with~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A presentation of thoughts so beautifully. I especailly admire the summation in the last verse. Love, Joyce |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I really like this Marge. Betty |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Thank you, Marge... These are wonderful. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Wonderful words of wisdom here Marge. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
oh i love this one marge, ( dunno how it took me so long to find it lol ) enjoyed the beauty and sweetness of this well written poem hugs from june x |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I so appreciate each kind reply~ Thank you for letting me share with you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Marge, This is absolutely beautiful.I really enjoyed it.Barb |
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