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Relax In Mother's Womb

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-11-17 08:28 PM

Relax In Mother's Womb

Yearning for softness of mattress,
I hold my pillow near to smell its freshness.
Somewhere in the air comes coffee scent,
But I'm too warm under my blanket to pick up that slippers.
Heavy coffee smell makes me dream deeper,
Deeper into smoothness where I lay.
I'm yearning for another hour,
Where I can ignore cold weather.
Cold weather belongs to outside,
Never will it disturbs my tranquillity.
I lay in warmth of my mother's womb,
Blanket is my mother's love.

(c)Nov 17, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-11-17 08:32 PM

Very nice, Eliza. Love, Joyce

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

2 posted 2003-11-19 02:50 PM

I absolutely love this one! I enjoy poems that have a lot of depth, yours wraps around beautifully.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa

magic_612
Member

since 2003-07-31

Posts 190
NB, Canada

3 posted 2003-11-19 11:03 PM

very impressive!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-11-19 11:44 PM

(smiles) Oh Eliza, your poetry is a shawl to comfort everyone everyday, sweet friend, may you forever feel your mothers love deep in your heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-20 04:09 AM

this is tender

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