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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time 
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**Welcome to my Matrix Revolutions induced depression, numero dos** I. Often, I would lie awake, just staring at her. She was so beautiful, almost radiant, amidst that deep façade of seemingly unbreakable courage. Oh, but I was the one to break her, find some way through a shell so hardened by fearless dignity. A whisper would unravel her deliberate senses, so intricate a song we sang; but a song of names it was. Encompassing the fermata of her voice with my own...so lyrically profound a notion is love. Each moment I felt her back pressed against me, I would sense the weight of a thousand prophecies amassing in my mind. Stillness flourished within us. She, couldn't linger very long, reading my needs like unwritten poetry on the paper of souls. She knew, as well as I, that every beginning must have an end. We felt, we bled together, every elusive second she traced my subconscious with an invisible finger, leading me away by a linen thread...to freedom. She was within me, as I was within her. Now though, I can faintly taste her ghost, as it murmurs me into a trinity of emotions: loneliness, love, and that art of letting go she taught me so well. Je t'aime Trinity...toujours, Neo II. He completed me. Balancing the unbalanced equations of life and death, somehow. I remember a time when we had achieved utter equilibrium in the art of deceiving inevitability. Once, I lent him my soundless breath; twice, he gave me life, drawn deep from the wells of impassioned silence. I spoke to him with my eyes, and he knew their language fluently. One word meant everything and nothing at all to us. Love, what blindness, what beautiful foolery it is, binding, with a silver chord, two souls together as one. Bond unbroken by what I'd give, what I knew I would do for him...die. To end my very being, I loved, I embodied his spirit in my own hands. He knew how to unleash a spell on my tongue, struck silent without incantation, nor curse. Of how I shed my fearlessness, and for one daring shard of eternity, I wanted, no...I needed to become vulnerable to him. My weakness, my greatest strength. Oh, forgive what destiny has given me. She knows not what she has done. But please, I beg him to cry for me only in his dreams. I need no elegy, no wavering requiem of unquenched pain. I only want him to remember how much I cherished what we shared. Je t'aime Neo,...toujours, Trinity If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi [This message has been edited by IndigoEve (11-14-2003 08:54 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Wow, this reads like a round robin love letter reception, dearest friend, I love the way you project both points of view here as truly both had their own enticing philosophy of love to one another, even if the rest of the movie was a flop! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is marvelous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IndigoEve~ This is absolutely beautiful~ 'I remember a time when we had achieved utter equilibrium in the art of deceiving inevitability. Once, I lent him my soundless breath; twice, he gave me life, drawn deep from the wells of impassioned silence. I spoke to him with my eyes, and he knew their language fluently. One word meant everything and nothing at all to us' I am saving this one to sift through the beautiful layers again~ My god you are so talented~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
IndigoEve: Incredibly complex and beautiful! I am enjoying your poetry very much! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
Keep that quill to paper young lady... You are indeed going somewhere. One AWESOME work of poetic art.  Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
IndigoEve You are starting your journey with seven league boots. I wish you luck. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Simply outstanding......an incredible talent. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was exquisite. I so much enjoy reading both sides and sharing of emotion in this piece. kathy Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Quite good writing of our favorite cinematic couple (the reference to Trinity and Neo a dead giveaway.) Tres Bien, Mon Amie. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is SO beautiful...I am speechless! Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Hello Indigo, your poetry is far more advanced than I would normally see in a person just fifteen...my daughter's age. Excellent write. My only advice, and it is one that I take myself...read work done by established poets, both living and dead...Pablo Neruda, Sylvia Plath, Yeats, Hafiz, Rumi, Lorca, Adrienne Rich and others. Many are available at www.poets.org and keep writing! Your talent is very promising as well as right now awesome! Sparticus |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
Wow, to everybody~thank you very much! I appreciate it a lot  If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What an incredibly complex and well done poem. I love the images you squeeze out of words like you have made the words yourself, and perhaps you have. You are a very talented young poet. I sure wish you success with this gift. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Beautiful Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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