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b.costen
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0 posted 2003-11-04 10:00 PM


Sand and Sea

Tilted, like a feeling
Of disappointment and shock

Smash, went the glass
Lake and cut its teeth upon the rock

Welled up, like a tear
In a child’s blind red eyes

Crash, went the salty
Wave and sprung up into the cloudless skies

Curled up, in the sand like a wet
Rose in a dark summer shower

Squeak, went the blue whale
As he flew from flower to flower

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1 posted 2003-11-05 02:49 PM






(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ben, the imagery in this is spectacular, sweet friend, love the surreality and mystique emotions portrayed here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ben, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-11-05 03:03 PM


Very nicely penned Ben.
Good to see yet another writer from Ontario!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

midnightblues
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3 posted 2003-11-05 11:55 PM


Dear Ben,

I enjoyed reading this very much!

Love
Michelle

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4 posted 2003-11-07 03:59 AM


wow
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5 posted 2003-11-07 02:30 PM


Ben~
There is such refreshing originality in this piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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6 posted 2003-11-07 07:25 PM


Ben:  This was unique in it's presentation and images!  Glad to see you posting here and enjoy!

Betty Lou Hebert

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