Corner Pub #2 |
Sand and Sea |
b.costen Member
since 2003-11-02
Posts 107ontario, CAN |
Sand and Sea Tilted, like a feeling Of disappointment and shock Smash, went the glass Lake and cut its teeth upon the rock Welled up, like a tear In a child’s blind red eyes Crash, went the salty Wave and sprung up into the cloudless skies Curled up, in the sand like a wet Rose in a dark summer shower Squeak, went the blue whale As he flew from flower to flower |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ben, the imagery in this is spectacular, sweet friend, love the surreality and mystique emotions portrayed here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ben, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Ben. Good to see yet another writer from Ontario! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Ben, I enjoyed reading this very much! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ben~ There is such refreshing originality in this piece~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Ben: This was unique in it's presentation and images! Glad to see you posting here and enjoy! Betty Lou Hebert |
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