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Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-10-28 11:35 AM

In the penumbra
Of your dazzling persona
I stand, unnoticed

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2003-10-28 04:38 PM

Great imagery in this poem. Step out from the shadow and she will see you, Dennis.

believe in what your heart feels...

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

2 posted 2003-10-28 04:49 PM

nice imagry. I like your style..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-10-29 11:24 AM

Very effective!

Betty Lou Hebert

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-11-01 12:18 PM

(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, yes, get out there in the heart of the light to where she can get your attention and may she see all your beauty within! (big hugggssssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dennis, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-11-01 08:41 PM

Wow !! Enjoyed. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-07 03:55 AM

sigh

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

7 posted 2004-01-07 08:49 PM

Dennis; this is beautiful! I haven't been here for a long time...my Muse awakeneth!! so checked to see your most recent..and this is glorious! hugs, Ellie P.U.Y.M.B.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Shereen
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 57
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-01-07 10:42 PM

I wonder, Dennis... are you unnoticed because you choose to be... (things that make ya go hmmmmmm!)

I liked this. Very "to the point" and so deep. Can't wait to read more.
Shereen.

Sparticus
Member

since 2003-11-15

Posts 245

9 posted 2004-01-08 09:41 AM

This one bites hard...Great image here.

Jesse

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2004-01-09 01:34 PM

Dennis~
Poignanancy in this piece~
PERFECT~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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