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Immortality |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Immortality The little chores I have to do Important only in my view. The world would be as sad or fun If I were gone, my chores undone. When all the other lives I touch Are past, there'll not be very much To make the world aware that I Was here to live, to love, to die. My design this, to write a line That could be uncommonly mine; A line that might survive the life I spent as simple mom and wife. When all is gone, my life, my home, If there in some old dusty tome A single rhyme of mine is found, A bit of me is still around. By: Joyce 10/24/03 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's our Joyce... you've no idea how I go back and read our deceased members poems. I find such comfort in such an act. Thank you, Joyce, for leaving a bit of yourself here with us. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thank you Sunshine and I hope both of us are around a long time to read the words of others. love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: This says so much! I guess most of us who are growing older, and write poetry or stories, hope something will remain when we're gone, that will be everlasting! At least within our families if no where else. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Joyce, that is exactly why I write, sweet friend, because it's not just helping myself, but I can also give my children something to cherish and sing along with me in spirit with, yay! (kiss on cheek) You've already given the world so much, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thank you dear Noah. You always raise my spirits. Love, Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joyce~ 'My design this, to write a line That could be uncommonly mine; A line that might survive the life I spent as simple mom and wife. When all is gone, my life, my home, If there in some old dusty tome A single rhyme of mine is found, A bit of me is still around.' Sweet lady ... I have NO DOUBT that your words will be immortal~ I love this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thank you sweet Marge. High praise from such as you. Love, Joyce |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
It would be nice to leave a manrk on the world before leaving it. I have felt this ,too. Love, Terri~ |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
oh yes so small a wish and i am sure it will come true too as your writing is so beautiful. hugs june x |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
you better not go anywhere, I don't have that many friends that write as well as you... funny, I was just thinking along those lines today myself and I recalled a piece I wrote some time ago. Great minds think alike..lol the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Beautiful Joyce! And what a lovely legacy to leave! Connie |
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Castlehigh New Member
since 2003-10-28
Posts 7Beautiful isle of Éire |
Greetings, Joyce! This is truly beautiful. It reminds me of what Shakespeare said in Sonnet XVIII - "But thy eternal summer shall not fade, Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st, Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade, When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st, So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives life to thee." This work: 'Immortality' is already well on its way to 'giving life to thee' and because you have written it and given it wings to fly the 'simple mom and wife' POETESS will always be present. Cordially, Castlehigh of Éire |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thanks to all of my dear friends and fellow poets who kept on reading while I was gone. Just got home and so much email and poetry to catch up with . Love, Joyce |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Goodness,Joyce...how do you do that? You take a single word...and then make it your own.For a poet(songwriter,artist,etc.),this beautiful offering you give has incredible weight of meaning.I believe that this most definitely is one of all of our hopes.It is so easy to feel insignificant and small, especially in a world that seems to grow bigger every day.But believe me,Joyce,when I say you will be always loved and remembered.Your heart shines through your writing...and that is something that is not easy to forget. Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thank you dear Geoff and I have seen the tenderness of your heart in your Poetry. May we all achieve immortality. Love, Joyce |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
me too... me too Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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