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IndigoEve
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Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2003-10-18 05:06 PM



words
what words kill me
separation of tragedy
in my river of pensive thoughts

silvery quality and breathless rhythms
how can these words  
sever
the designs for my paradise
once ambrosial
twice paradoxical
this story of undoubted fusion
'tween my mouth and soul

words
worth a thousand vigilant eyes
strangely dizzy
as I breathe into my poetry

reaching that end in Elysium's fields
where fingers bleed upon boundaries
open to
unchaste world

she will not leave,
will not go

hold on
a little longer than eternity
fate has yet to speak
these words

phlegmatic impressions
laced in between aversion's mercy
oh, antipathy of stars
foolishness
I possess as my song
why cry?
we only see what we need

these words
words that flow
flow
from my fingers
and from my soul

where paper agitates their fragility
gravely searching

for the poet from which they came
to fruitlessly attempt return




For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

[This message has been edited by IndigoEve (10-18-2003 05:07 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-19 02:37 PM




(sigh) Ths is deep and emotive writing, sweet friend, your words truly are a soup of music and I think a the bottom of its broth is all you are looking for! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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2 posted 2003-10-20 12:16 PM


Words so strong and yet so weak.
If only they said what we would speak.  Joyce

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3 posted 2003-10-23 03:59 AM


brilliant write
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-10-23 09:05 AM


IndigoEve~
This is really GOOD !

Layered ... and lovely~

'as I breathe into my poetry'

AND - I love this thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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