Corner Pub #2 |
L'Amour Interdit |
IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
**Pardon the length!! ** oh, for the shame of passion delicately known barely alive, to stumble into shaded grounds and gaze upon the rapture of your beauty painted porcelain dreams for thee mon aimé, toujours fall away, amid supple young lilies combed with gold dust this day, the throes of torrid springtime rain shower them in a mist of forgetful longing. such repercussions unmentionable we are tainted, lover borrowed from the melodies of a subtle breeze drifting along as easily, prayerfully unnoticed sanctity, my love this is true holiness your lips like satin fire against my blanching hand she steals up the hem of silk pewter and gold spread in rich cascades of fabric pooling around feet spun from liquid glass tears and musings cannot compare this ardor she feels for his soul eyes burn an amber ocean into her turquoise sea oh fire! oh unruly flame! spreading quicker 'cross the Atlantic through the essence of her mind just as refined, e'en chasing stars in the light of midday's fancy my darling I say it again- for the shame of passion with a touch of virgin innocence you and I hands, but lips intertwined to speak not of heated fervency but a weightlessly fragile kiss sewing butterflies into her stare replacing broken wings with the sighs and breaths of a contented man simply indulged how she entangles her nimble fingers in his ecru tresses staining each strand with her lips her own hair falling 'round them a curtain of ebony-winged relief pray, hide them the world knows not what they do mon amour, wordless dignity be thine gift to embellish my soul with the preciosity of tingeing silence it covers me in a wave of sentiment I can hear it sounds of budding emotion raining around us blushing a flawless aria to grace the ivory wood of our gazebo shrine to me goddess of your bleeding heart oh, but lover, do not leave me yet. 'tisn't the hour, nor the place... deux amoureux blissfully condemned by their twining of fate like fingers upon fingers and eyes within eyes hushed fears quieted by some season's changing always turning into a greener spring what a beautifully tragic way to sigh L'amour interdit ...the forbidden love frozen in place with the wind they never leave sleeping in the other's embrace oh, curse thee who finds them here and stirs them both awake For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssss) Oh my gosh, you are so amazingly talented, sweet friend, wow, only 15, you are wise beyond many years! (sigh) Forbidden love truly can hurt and damage many and I only pray many can come to their senses and break free from the dark temptation, God Bless You, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Indigo Eve: An impressive write indeed! Betty Lou Hebert |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
You sure capture why love is such a tough emotion with this poem. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Pure romance. Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is a brilliantly crafted piece. Your talent shines like a beacon in the night. welcome to the corner. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
into my library! |
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