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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2003-09-19 02:16 PM


slumber softly

she quietly says vulnerable

you need some time to heal

here let me hold you, my friend

and dry away your tears.

Sinking into sweet comfort

understanding and concern

my friend feels the broken

hearts touching, making whole.

She reads my injured mind

speaks His love to my soul

awakening to the feel of peace

a ladies comfort and healing smile.

my friend, we cry as we share

confessing weakness,evil,fragile

now i lay me down, purged, to sleep

slumber softly on mother's breast

she quietly says vulnerable

you need some time to heal

here let me hold you, my friend

and dry away your tears.

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[This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (09-19-2003 02:16 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-19 04:25 PM


Very tender write. What a blessing to have someone who truly cares. Chris


Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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2 posted 2003-09-20 12:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, dearest Daniel, your heart and hers shine out in this most compassionate write! (sigh) True love is able to kiss away ones tears and replace them with comfort and tears of joy, sweet friend, may this special unconditional love forever fill your lives, this is sheer poetic delight, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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