Moon Lights My Pen On Fire

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Moon Lights My Pen On Fire

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-09-19 12:02 PM

Moon Lights My Pen On Fire

I have put my pen aside for dust;
Now I pull out that drawer of mine;
A soft blow from me, undo your dust.
The moon is nice, I don't want to stand
Alone observing stars at night.

Couldn't count my missing in the stars,
Couldn't count my the words unspoken,
I'm glad I have a pair of stars in front of me tonight-
Your pair of fine eyes, reflects on mine.
Each pair of stars, reflects each friend on my heart.

My joy is like tears sparkles among the starslight,
Enhanced by moonshine gloss lips.
My lips are sealed with speehless story,
Yet my story is shown through my eyes.

I have put my pen aside for dust;
Now I pull out that drawer of mine;
A soft blow from me, undo your dust.
The moon is nice, I'm glad I didn't miss
Your shadow next to the moonshine,
Quietly staring at my eyes.

(c)Sept 18, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-09-19 10:11 AM

Eliza, I must say that this is going into my library straight away! This is lovely! In my opinion, your best yet! hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2003-09-19 01:44 PM

Eliza: Enjoyed this poem Eliza. Moonlight does inspire us in many ways!

Betty Lou Hebert

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-09-19 11:44 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I believe the moon inspires every poet, reminding us that there is a most perfect light in our universe that our hearts awaken to and all at once we feel the light channel through our veins! (big hugggssssss) This is a masterpiece, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

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