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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-08-26 02:27 PM

Was I Wrong?

Woman: Writing a letter to you,
Yet you're gone.
Gone not to heaven,
But in someone else arms.

Sometimes I would rather think
I had killed you.
Yet when I asked myself
In tranquility, I

I really don't want you to be hurt.

I would rather keep my sobs like raindrops
Quietly tiptoes to my letters to you.
I know you would never read them,
For I would never let them shown.

I know my heart can't be heal,
And writing to you don't help a bit.
Cause in my mind I know
I know you never cared and you will never know-

How much I care!

Man: Maybe I did care
Only you didn't know.
Maybe I once loved
Yet I couldn't speak of
The love that once existed.

Maybe I didn't know what to do.
I only knew I didn't want to get hurt.
I knew we were different.
I knew values were far from matched.

So I've decided
To leave you.
The longer I stay, I more hurt both of us gonna be.
So I left,
Leaving you behind my heart hurt.
But then I knew my option was right,
Cause I've found another
Whose values are so close to mine.

You will find someone like I did
Who would cherish you more then I did.
Just listen please...

Woman: I don't want to hear.
You the selfish dog, I ever met.
If you really loved me,
You wouldn't leave me because something didn't match.

Lovers compromise,
Lovers won't easily say goodbye.

You never loved me.
Never loved me true.
Oh mine,
What did I do wrong?

©Aug 26, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2003-08-26 03:23 PM

Eliza: It always takes two to make a relationship work! Sometimes it never happens, no matter how much we care.

Betty Lou Hebert

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-08-28 07:10 PM

What is wrong is not telling the person. Keeping it from the one that was the partner is what is wrong.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2003-08-29 12:36 PM

Tillium and Shara Rose are both right. So many times one word would solve the problem. Joyce

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