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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-08-22 06:41 PM

My Star My Soulmate

It's summer night again;
Once you've fallen asleep
Into deep dreams,
At a night like this.

You said the stars are like
Angels whispering hymns
To your ears,
Praying as you asleep.

I sometimes wondered
Which star are you,
Who is watching over me,
Guiding me in the stars.

Just when I was to cry,
I heard a puppy mourned.
So I opened the door
And there he was
Laying in a paper box.

So I picked up the puppy;
A slip fell to the ground.
I had been waiting for so long,
Till this day I received
A mail from you.

God did answer my prayer,
In a season like this,
God sent me a letter,
Telling me he was alright.

In the letter,
I could see he was happy
In everyday he lived,
And the most memorable time
Was spent with me.

And the most memorable lines,
Was he swore there was no regrets,
In his life caused he'd found,
His soulmate.

(c)Aug 22, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (08-22-2003 06:44 PM).]

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-08-22 06:49 PM

Aww this is so sweet!! What a cute poem!!

Loved it!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-08-22 07:06 PM

Eliza~

'You said the stars are like
Angels whispering hymns
To your ears,
Praying as you asleep.'

I've not read a prettier thought this day~
You continue growing in your poetry~
This is sheer heavenly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

3 posted 2003-08-22 07:32 PM

very nice thought...

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-08-22 08:46 PM

Well done Eliza. This is very pretty. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2003-08-22 09:51 PM

Eliza: Your poem has a lot of charm!

Betty Lou Hebert

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2003-08-22 10:27 PM

Eliza, this is a great piece and I absolutely adore the following:

You said the stars are like
Angels whispering hymns
To your ears,
Praying as you asleep.

Just fantastic. Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

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