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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-08-16 01:28 AM


Breathing Heavily

Off work everyday
As usual,
My heart is cold
Yet my smile shows through.
Working is the best
Yet the pain killer.
My secret stays safe,
Forever in my heart.

Yet you are
Sitting beside me,
Yet my mouth seem sealed.
Sitting beside me,
Yet you seem so far away.
I feel like breathing
Is getting heavy.

None of us can break that wall of
Communication, something is on your mind.
Yes something is on my mind, too.

I want to leave yet my heart say-
I will be missing you.
My heart still love you true.

I, I have tried to escape in work.
I, I have tried to forgive you.
Yet what I can't forget is you.

So what can I do?
I want to leave yet my heart say-
I will be missing you.
My heart still love you true.

Can't you hear me?
Let's not fight again...

Can't we try once more
Can't we try once more time.
Tell me what's on your heart.
I can't help but stay...

Author Notes: This poem isn't about anyone, but my imagination.

(c)Aug 15, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2003-08-16 01:26 PM


Eliza;  Great imagination you have! It sounds like it is really happening. Words of communication are so often hard to find!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2003-08-16 06:19 PM


Very imaginative, seems like a real experience.  Joyce
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3 posted 2003-08-16 06:25 PM


Your imagination is fantastic.
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