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SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-08-08 04:16 PM

It's really too bad
tears from things of old
so long ago
yet still
ever present
It's really too bad
they can't
bring back
the
things that
were
good.
If
they could
You
would be
smiling
at me
again
No
more
talk
about
our sins.
Begin
again
my friend?
Wash
it all
away.
Let it
go!
For-
give
this
day!

I'm sorry!

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

AniKay83
Member

since 2000-06-28

Posts 388
Missing Since 1999

1 posted 2003-08-08 05:22 PM

Yeah, I like this. "No more talk about our sins."

A little side note: In your critique section you said "Please be kind. I'm not so good at this thing called poetry, but what I don't have in skill I make up for with heart."
Well, I think you just named the only requirement needed to make you good at this thing called poetry!

Much love,
~Chrissy

smooth people stray by slinking onward
to the limousine-society
found in alleys hot
with Humanity in passing

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-08-08 06:37 PM

Thanks.

You are sweet. Bless ya!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2003-08-08 07:54 PM

Very wistful. I enjoyed. Joyce

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-08-08 08:37 PM

Thanks Joyce. I am glad you enjoyed.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

5 posted 2003-08-09 06:24 AM

Shararose this is almost like a prayer. Very touchinf Maggie

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

6 posted 2003-08-09 06:50 AM

done with a refreshing style. nice...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-08-09 12:52 PM

Thank you Cusick...just words from my heart.

Thanks Pegasus-- I am glad you liked. I do it with the pauses that come to mind while writing.

I appreciate the thoughts of both of you.

Bless ya both,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2003-08-09 02:06 PM

Shara Rose: An unusual format, but the message can't be faulted!

Betty Lou Hebert

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

9 posted 2003-08-09 04:28 PM

Thanks for the comment.

Bless ya!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

edwreck02
Junior Member

since 2003-08-08

Posts 24
Florida

10 posted 2003-08-12 10:18 PM

I dont know what to say i really like this poem alot.. to put it simple the words relate to things Ive been through and puts a smile to my face knowing that someone could write something that hits me with emotion to the point that Im sent back thinking of a love Ive let go...eddie :.)

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

11 posted 2003-08-13 09:16 AM

Unique and well written I really enjoyed this. Maggie

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-08-14 04:07 AM

wise words

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

13 posted 2003-08-14 04:45 PM

Ed- Thank you. I am glad you can relate. Sometimes hearing it from another person makes you feel not so alone in it.

Cusick- I am glad you enjoyed.

passing shadow- Thank you for the kind words.

to all,
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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