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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Goodbye Kiss I glance slightly to your way, Whispering, "What can I do for you today?" The only response I get from you Is a smile, But a smile would be enough for tonight. A smile from you lights up my heart- My heart is throbbing. A smile from you releases my unspoken words- Tonight I'm gonna to tell you How I'm feeling, a feeling so true. I glance slightly to your way, Turn to your ear and say, "What can I do for you today?" The only respnse I get from you Is a smile, But a smile would be enough for tonight. I smile back to you, yet don't you know Behind all those smile is loneliness. I smile back to you, yet in my heart There are thousands words I need to tell- How I'm feeling, a feeling so true. Don't hold me back, Don't say I'm a little girl, Cause I'm a woman that you can't deny. Cause I love you. I don't know what's your feeling, But I'm getting burnt inside my heart. Give me a kiss. I need your hugs tonight. Give me... Give me a goodbye kiss. And after this hug and kiss we shall never see each other Again... (c)Aug 7, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ Dang girlie ... this one is SAD !!!! Well, it's pretty ... but sad~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
No! dont just let it go like that! grab him now! holy cow, frustrated love just doesnt get any better than this! |
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edwreck02 Junior Member
since 2003-08-08
Posts 24Florida |
I liked it your poem Eliza.. its amazing how love produces a force inside so great we attempt to blot them on paper but never will one be satisfied when it comes to describings what we feel in words |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Eliza, this is a sad, sad song and I'm sorry it hurts so much.  Darn it .... Hugs and more hugs, Marti |
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