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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Through Flowered Fields Through flowered fields, I walked today, To where the land just falls away. There lies a canyon, deep and wide, That separates the countryside. The drafts of air, that slowly rise, Bear red-tailed hawks, into the skies. I listened to their piercing cries. They looked at me with raptor's eyes! I stayed awhile to watch them soar. Then, like a ship beyond the shore, I drifted down the rim-rock, so, I could enjoy what lay below And all the blossoms, blooming bright. The canyon filled with somber light And as the day to nighttime yields, I headed home, through flowered fields! Betty Lou Hebert Published by Best of Rhyme Time, 1998 [This message has been edited by Trillium (07-29-2003 01:54 AM).] |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thank you for such a pleasurable walk. Melton |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
What a beauty, like all the blossoms you walked through!!!! Lovely stroll for me, too!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
another delicious flight my dear...  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
The imagery was amazing in this piece...I could feel myself there, taking everything you wrote into my heart. Truly a beautiful writing. You're very talented and I will await more from you... ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is truly lovely. ( I am busy catching up. My sister is still here and so much to take care of.  Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: Thanks for strolling along! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Shara Rose: Thanks for reading and glad you could envision the scenery! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus111: Good to see your nice comments. Thanks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
J Lynn: Thanks for reading and appreciate your sweet comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Glad to see your comments. Enjoy your time with your sister! Betty Lou Hebert |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Thanks for taking me for the walk as well. Dawn |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dawn: Thanks for reading and strolling along. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Betty Lou I am so glad that this stunning piece of writing was published. You are so deserved of such recognition and you should be so proud of the joy your words bring to others, like myself. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Thanks for commenting and of course, having others enjoy what I have written, is the greatest reward of all! Betty Lou Hebert |
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