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BrokenWingedAngel Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60 |
There's not much to say Besides things already said Yet my mind still wanders As off to bed I head Is it right to step back Or is this a good bye Still I know there must be A break between you and I We were moving way to fast To really understand Otherwise I wouldn't feel forced when you need a helping hand You'd also always know That silence isn't bad Can be comfortable with friends As I was, in days we've had My fire must burn brightly Not be smothered by anyone Yet, I was running out of room To sit back and just have fun There wasn't time for any friends Or to do my "job" You took my attention for yourself To others, now I seem a snob And when I tried to fix the gaps Between here and then Arguements were started That I know I'd never win I don't think you understand Quite what I'm trying to say Just remember that I love you But at a cost I can not pay It's a never ending cycle Once it's started a deadly spin I will not live with possesiveness Least not like I did back then So as I lay my head down I'll consider carefully Then once again decide on This break for you and me. I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Enjoyed reading this. No one should feel smothered in a relationship. |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Good poem about your inner feelings. Hope things work out well for you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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He who talks to the dead Junior Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 30Newport, United Kingdom |
Poignant as ever. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
It's a good thing to step back and consider before it is too late. Good writing. Joyce |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
It's sad to have to choose. :'( SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Angel, you are so right to feel this way. wholesome love must contain the freedom to continue to grow as an individual as well as a couple. "If the bird doesn't return then it really wasn't yours" Enjoyed the sharing of your thoughts very much. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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