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BrokenWingedAngel Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60 |
Remember the way it used to be, when everyone was free.. Remember the times shared, when all laughed, cried, and cared... Remember all the happiness, that came with the first kiss... Remember all the good times, forget about the lies.. Remember all the voices, speaking riddles in your head... Remember wondering why live, when easily you could be dead... Remember all the pain, that comes like winters bane... Remember all the lonely nights, laying cold, alone in bed... Remember the secret smiles, building bridges across miles... Remember the light caress, why settle for anything less... Remember all the happy thoughts, that can't be bought... Remember the warm feelings, that set your heart to tingling... Remember the heart breaking, with every sun rising... Remember the tears, you'll shed them through the years... Remember the goodbyes, the burning in your eyes... Remember the aching in your throat, sadness, like on a sinking boat... Remember all these things, the good times and the bad... Remember what could have been, and all the tings we had... Remember that I love you, that's all that needs said... Remember where you are now, it's better there then dead... Remember me, when we part, this sadness won't last long... Remember me, when you're sad, your heart will go on... Remember all we've said and done, and know I'll still care... Remember to look in your heart, For I'll always be there. I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I especially like the last verse! *S* Well done! *S* |
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TheGoalie Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 47Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny |
Remember all the voices, speaking riddles in your head... Remember wondering why live, when easily you could be dead... Remember all the pain, that comes like winters bane... Remember all the lonely nights, laying cold, alone in bed... This stanza alone made me want to add this to my library. Very well done. "Ain't Got no quarrels with God, ain't got no time to grow old. Lord knows I'm weak, won't somebody get me off of this reef" |
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He who talks to the dead Junior Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 30Newport, United Kingdom |
As always love, they tug on the heart strings. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Well done. The last verse wraps it all up. Thanks, Melton |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
- smiling - you always write the good stuff BWA... - hugs - |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I hope the good memories outweigh the bad. Sad stuff. Joyce |
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wild irish Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 31 |
very good www.rateapoet.com |
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BrokenWingedAngel Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60 |
 Thanks everyone  @ Sol, guess what babe I'm bbbaaacckkk Mental block and such is all gone... Still working out a few ((a lot, if I'm honest about it)) rough edges, but I'm almost back to normal again Thanks again everyone, BWA I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
very well done Angel... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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