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TheGoalie Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 47Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny |
-Fallen- I sit alone, in silence and dark, Fighting back bitter tears. The hell that I have brought Unto myself is the prison In which I must remain. Your pain is my fault I cannot help that now. To know I hurt the one I treasure most of all Cuts me to the bone. Desperately, blindly, I cling To hope. All I have got left now Is the notion you will not give up On me, your fallen prince, A boy who lost his way. If you leave me now, The fault will all be mine. I cannot keep you here If where you want to be is No longer in my arms. I fell so far, so fast, so hard From your grace, I could not even see The tears in your eyes when They looked upon me. I hurt you Worse than I could know. Still, I hold tight to the Blind hope that your fallen prince Can still be your king. For all I want in this whole world Is to be by your side again. "Ain't Got no quarrels with God, ain't got no time to grow old. Lord knows I'm weak, won't somebody get me off of this reef" |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
mournful wails in the dark. repentant, hopeful. I think you could tighten this piece up a bit. what do you think? the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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