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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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A Fragile Spell I heard a song the other day. An old one that I used to play On the piano, while we sang. It caused a sudden, wistful pang, Because those days have disappeared And the piano, I revered, Has long been gone and not replaced. Our voices that so often graced The evening hours, silent now. I wish I could revive somehow, Those early years, for I recall, Contentment hovered over all. Too many problems came to dwell And broke that sweet and fragile spell! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (07-01-2003 11:16 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sad write but beautifully done |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: Thanks. It's not really about me! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhBettyLou~ I just knew I'd find a wistfully lovely piece~ I did ... I've got an old one along the same lines back in the archives I dug up for you~ /pip/Forum4/HTML/001991.html *Huglets* to you and my RonGuy~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
A very beautiful poem.  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Thanks so much for the link to your poem, which I found very moving. I love everything you write! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
ladybug: Thanks for responding and glad that you enjoyed the poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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missmisery61 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 56 |
Betty Lou, what a beautiful piece. What is it about days gone past that are so heart breaking? |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
missmisery61: Thanks for responding and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I don't know why the past stays with us so and sneaks up on us sometimes! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A good one Betty. But yours are always appealing. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Thanks! You always give great comments too! Betty Lou Hebert |
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BrokenWingedAngel Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60 |
The past does have an odd way of sneaking up on you, doesn't it? I really enjoyed this... Reminded me of my own music hidden somewhere yet to be re-obtained. /pip/Forum27/HTML/002163.html Very nicely written  BWA I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
BWA: Thanks for responding. Appreciate your comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Day dreaming is definitely a sweet feeling. Reality haunts us far too much. Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: It's so easy to fallinto daydreaming! I find myself doing it too often. Betty Lou Hebert |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Pulled at my heartstrings so much. Choked back the tears. This is so sad. Made me want to pat this person on the shoulder, and tell them it's going to be alright. Ahem..still clearing my throat. :'( SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Shara Rose: Thanks for commenting on this. Life sure can be hard going at times can't it? Betty Lou Hebert |
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