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You and i

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

0 posted 2001-07-17 03:36 PM

I am more important than you;
Mr. Webster and linguists agree,
Else why are you spelled with a very small y,
But a capital I for me?

This doesn't seem right somehow.
I want the whole world to see
Since i have met You, i'm a very small i,
But you are a You to me.

My God, You will always be You,
While i'm only an i, you see,
But i matter to You, and as long as i do
You will be the great You to me.

By Joyce 7/16/2001

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2001-07-17 03:56 PM

Joyce: Very clever and I really enjoyed this.

Betty Lou Hebert

Inanothertime
Member

since 2001-06-29

Posts 72

2 posted 2001-07-18 07:34 AM

I really enjoyed this, Joyce, it has an e.e.cummings ,silly,warm and fuzzy feel, and i thank You!

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

3 posted 2001-07-18 11:04 PM

This is really neat!
Great poem!

~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial)

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-07-23 03:16 PM

Joyce-
   Very clever write..
   I like..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-07-24 08:05 PM

How cute and creative, Joyce, I'm with everyone else - I'll second that "clever!"

Melissa~

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2001-07-24 09:07 PM

Joyce, this is soooo cute and soooo clever! I enjoyed this very much!

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