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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk 
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I smell the change of seasons wind Autumns Temper breezes in I see the Moody sky in sulk Quckening clouds bowl by in bulk I love the passionate setting sun Of autumns fire with winters turn Shades of emerald die and blacken Falling leaves and dried up bracken Bare branches scratch the sky Beds of colour wither and die Fields shine with frosty veil Exquisite weave across the dale Glorious golds and reds rain down Carpets of copper and crackling brown Evening light like premature dawn Summer gives way as winter`s born |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
The passing season really said so well. Very nice.  Love, Terri~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
junemac: A lovely poem and sounds as if your autumn season is much like ours here in the northwestern part of the USA! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very, very engaging. I hope though that autumn still has a few tricks left for you. Love, Joyce |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Junemac I loved this, and especially the last stanza. We are just coming into summer here, and I hope that it is as beautiful arriving as it is leaving. Lovely write, as always from you! Connie x |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
ahhh thank you Terri, Betty lou, Joyce and Connie. England is in my opinion is at its most beautiful right at the beginning of each season, I think my own favourite is spring though. hugs and thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. june xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh June, spring is my most favorite season too because everything is blooming and coming to life and all the sweet birds are singing, but winter too is pretty and I welcome the season! (kiss on cheek) Your words beam with lovely imagery, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've painted a lovely picture, junemac! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me love winter a little bit |
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