Corner Pub #2 |
The Question |
Brenda Hall Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 88Texas,USA |
There comes a time in our life In good times or while in strife Our 'checkered past', take it's toll And needing to search our own soul The Question needing asked today What does our heart really say Do we weep, worry, or do we fret Was it our best or was it regret As our heart beats so very fast We analyze our 'checkered past' Remembering, we have come far Yet we wonder, where we are The Lord weighs our every sin But don't worry my children If asked, I will guide thee Always and through eternity By: Brenda Hall "the passionate poet" [This message has been edited by Brenda Hall (06-08-2003 08:16 PM).] |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I really like this. It make me think. I guess I haven't tried my best in lots of things. I also know most of the times my parents are right even the answer I hate. I hope I will change before regret hit the door. Thanks for the message. Eliza Simmons |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very good write Brenda - enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brenda~ Very wise ... nice to see you again~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Brenda, i esp like the last stanza Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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