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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2003-06-08 12:49 PM

firery hot sky
goosebumps appear on the skin
cooling summer breeze

one solitude bird
sings for all that will listen
so sweet the melody

Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-06-08 01:29 PM

Very nice!! Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-06-08 02:57 PM

hey Kathy, good to see you again!
enjoyed these,
especially love that
solo song

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2003-06-08 03:57 PM

Yes I like these little sentences that speak volumes. Joyce

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

4 posted 2003-06-09 12:09 PM

Dear Kathy,

I really like this!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

5 posted 2003-06-09 02:59 PM

Thank you all for your replies..I do not get here as often as I like but it is good to see all of you too

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-06-09 04:25 PM

KitKat~
SO good to see you !!!!
How's life treating you ?

LOVE these beauties~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

7 posted 2003-06-09 07:10 PM

oh these are little gems !! liked them very much especially the first one.

hugs from june x

teledon
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 51
Florida USA

8 posted 2003-06-12 11:05 PM

very nice .. I love the haiku form .. especially when it hews to the traditional Japanese requirement of
writing about the seasons ..

"keep it simple"

teledon
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 51
Florida USA

9 posted 2003-06-13 12:43 PM

my repy of the other day was not posted for some reason .. 2nd try:
nicely done .. I love haikus ..

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

10 posted 2003-06-13 03:52 PM

thank you again everyone..I am glad you enjoyed these..I like writing the haikus and tankas too.

Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love

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