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fragmented, haphazard poem....sorry!
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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dear he stares out, so pale faced the crayon scratched him blurry.. i cannot capture him today, nor I, my peace has ran away. Tried to steal it, amongst the butterflies, that netted, dear cobwebbed fields, why is the sunny weed just flowing, not caught again, flying out of reach. mirror, mirror, who am i? I need to touch again, dear reassurance, the pale bright copies of ourselves. Dear muse, I am fragmented, the speech has hidden, I cannot stay. "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
an interesting write... and this..... Tried to steal it, amongst the butterflies, that netted, dear cobwebbed fields, why is the sunny weed just flowing, not caught again, flying out of reach. Love the imagery. Maree  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A kalaidoscope of words and thoughts. Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful imagery..much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
thank you Dark Angel, I'm glad you liked it love, claire |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Joyce. thank you for that... must have been inspired by Marge's poem love, claire "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Dear Nancy, I'm glad you did! Thank you so much for answering love, claire xxx |
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