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Be Vulnerable

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-05-14 08:05 PM

Be Vulnerable

Sometimes sitting next to you
Make me nervous, as my palm
Raining all over my pen-
A pen that write you my songs.

Dare to be vulnerable tonight,
As I sing in reminding myself.
Dare to be vulnerable tonight,
As I sing softly to background
                          ...melody

One word utter after another,
I tell you my little world and me.
One word... one word from you
Make me forget about boundaries.

Dare to be vulnerable tonight,
As I see sincere in your eyes.
Dare to be vulnerable tonight,
As I see that’s the way
                          ...learning to trust.

So please pay care to my words,
For the songs are hidden with
                          ...private tales.
So please be gentle to my wounds,
For they’re already deep in
                          ...my heart.

©May 14, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Side Note: Sometimes it is scarely to make new friend and open up... I don't know whether another person will think I am a fool.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-05-25 01:28 AM

very good writing! i can relate

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2003-05-25 11:48 AM

Dear Eliza,

how can u be a fool when u can put so much emotion into ur writing? I like this very much *smileZ*

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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