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Yesterday Insult, Today's Gain |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind ![]() |
Yesterday Insult, Today's Gain Yonder a gardener Enjoyed much her flowers, That she invited a guest, In sharing her joy. Just so happened her guest May have been moody, A little more critical Than her usual fit. Tearing, insulting Her flowers and her peace. Yet she wasn't angry, She gave thanks for the insight. Weeks later, she was to Make the same mistakes, Yet she was reminded By her guest's comments. Thinking of shifting Focus of the garden, At last she shown Her flowers to her mother. Suprisingly, her mother who Didn't like much Spending time in garden, Stayed the whole evening- to breath. Breathing the scent Of the flower, walking, smiling. Yesterday insult, today's gain. Yesterday insult, but never mind. (c)May 11, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons ~Every girl has a dream within. ~Yesterday insult, today gain. [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (05-11-2003 06:20 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ 'Yesterday insult, today's gain' Sweetie, you sum up the GAIN sooooooooo well~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very good, thought-provoking poem. I really like it. ![]() Hugs, Ethel |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice Eliza. She was probably just jealous. Love, Joyce |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write! |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dearest Eliza, i do love this! its very very touching! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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