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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind ![]() |
Who Say Whom Is Some say the worst is Without dignity. Some say self-worth come From Within. Yet who knows the torture Of careless hearts. Yet who understands The bitter smile on the face. Some say the worst is Never taste love. Some say love begin With giving. Yet who can guarantee Love will return. Yet who understands The desperate of a...broken heart. Some live happily another day, And some say those are the luckiest. Who has thought one day, the luckiest one, Has a relative died for love. And who can say he or she is a coward? Life could seem so intolerable That we couldn't see future are awaiting For us to discover- what a crime of fate- All we can say it is but sadness, A burden families can't forget. (c)May 9, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
wow, i really liked it, so true, so very true, keep writing I really enjoy reading your poems! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Eliza, this is very insightful Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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