Two stoned Tyranosaurus moaned

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Two stoned Tyranosaurus moaned

allan
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since 2000-04-09

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0 posted 2001-07-06 03:00 PM

Two stoned
Tyranosaurus moaned
deep in a glade of the night
By a bough cleft in tween
lay a field full of green
Smoking the two out of sight

In one's twinkling eye
came a vision so strange
it seemed like a cosmic joke
Nudging his twin
he looked within
whilst taking a sensual toke

The creature so slight
so weird, weak and white
made them chortle and clack
But the ghost was soon gone
They licked lips and bone
And started the search for a snack

Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19

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1 posted 2001-07-06 08:37 PM

Funny image and clever too, I like it.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Lighthousebob
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Posts 4725
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2 posted 2001-07-07 01:21 AM

I liked the conflict that your poem creates for me between the real and the imaginary.
Two stoned tyraonosaurus rex's eating a ghost.... way cool and now who really maoned.... was it them or their ghost?

allan
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3 posted 2001-07-07 06:53 AM

Thanks to you...

brian madden
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4 posted 2001-07-07 02:00 PM

funny it made me think of when the metor hit earth, and wiped out the Dinosaurs which if you are aiming at humour might make a better gag line. THough I am not suggesting a re-write or trying to make comments where they were not asked for.

Enjoyed this alot.

"Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh

allan
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5 posted 2001-07-08 05:25 AM

Yes Brian, thanks - I saw this only later when I got a few comments. (c;

dgvarner
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