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peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

0 posted 2003-04-30 09:58 PM

My life is full of broken promises and empty dreams,
Being pulled in ten different ways it seems.
Anger is working its way into my blood stream,
The fear of it all, it screams, it sings.
All self-esteem is floating downstream.
Life is full of hatred, belief, and love from this angle,
Never slipping, getting people tangled.
These frustrations have got to be strangled,
The dread of it all screams from this triangle.
Yelling doesn't help get my heart untangled.

The sky is one big cloud of anger.
The sun is crying - this is danger.
It sings it echoes.
To me, this rainbow is a stranger.
Let me off right now, I'm endangered.

Irritations clouding near my eyes, slurring my sight,
The relevance of everything just seems too bright.
Why do I always have to run away in fright?
Turned off the light to ignore this pitiful bullfight.
Everybody is sitting around, saying I'm impolite.
I'm flying into this enormous rage,
My soul, my echo is trapped in a cage.
My life just can't seem to turn to the next page.
I won't put all these emotions on stage,
So I sit way in the back, out of gauge.

The sky is one big cloud of anger.
The sun is crying - this is danger.
It sings it echoes.
To me, this rainbow is a stranger.
Let me off right now, I'm endangered.

It sings it echoes, it cries from within,
It whispers, it moves, it screams from within.
Yet all through the process it doesn't make a sound,
A way to get out of this mess, I haven't found.
The echoes live inside, they'll never escape
But will eventually grow into a new shape.

The sky is one big cloud of anger.
The sun is crying - this is danger.
It sings it echoes.
To me, this rainbow is a stranger.
Let me off right now, I'm endangered.

Emotions - they sing, they echo.
They live don't die,
They sing they echo.
They come from inside.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

1 posted 2003-04-30 10:02 PM

well expressed. I have low self-esteem too, but I keep writing. You too, keep up the work.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2003-05-01 08:25 AM

This is really good! Very expressive.

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-05-01 08:59 AM

PeacefulDreamer~
Welcome to the Corner Pub of encircling friends and poets~

This is a heartfelt emote~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-05-01 04:08 PM

Mmmm This doesn't fit your name at all. Peaceful Dreamer. I hope the name describes the real you. Very emotional. Joyce

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-05-26 03:43 AM

very well expressed

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