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Mysterious Eyes and Tender Moon |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind ![]() |
Mysterious Eyes and Tender Moon Mysterious green eyes of yours, Look around in the dark, Can't find anything to lay your fine green eyes. A beam of light suddenly shine upon your head. You cautiously step back and lie down on your back. "Be quiet, it's the moon, Who has come to visit your fine eyes. Don't be afraid. She is here to caress your hair And gives you good sleep." Laying beside the road, You gaze at the benign moonshine To find she is smiling And reaching out from the sky above To you down on earth. And you soon find out, That she has been waiting this way Night after night sitting on her side bed, Watching you with her eyes open awake, Just to see you safe Sleeping in on the road. Side note: This is a poem about a cat sleeping under moonlight. The moon is like the cat's mother, always watching, reaching out for her. (c)April 27, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhEliza~ How 'mysteriously' unique~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Eliza, I love poems that tell of stories!!! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Interesting poem and I enjoyed it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
wow, this is a truly beautiful write ![]() ![]() "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I am glad ylu explained that it wasn't little Eliza lying by the road. Joyce |
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