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The Unicorn |
Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Through a clearing,gently dancing, a unicorn with beauty...prancing snorts greeting to the morning traces of dew on grassy upturned faces Laughing meadow cries,echo falling like the call of mystic thralling And all around is mist enshrouded All in a cloud is shadow founded The unicorn with steps recorded on tender slopes she has cavorted, listens to retreating breezes Dripping water winter freezes Turning,dipping without malice, sipping as though from a chalice Testing all and taking any token blades from glades a-plenty Summer 1985 Geoffrey Sonnen If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Through a clearing,gently dancing, a unicorn with beauty...prancing snorts greeting to the morning traces of dew on grassy upturned faces Oh, I love this. I can see it all in my mind. Just beautiful. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This reads so well it makes me believe in unicorns. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Fantastical! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Street Heart: This is a lovely, fantasy poem and I enjoyed it very much! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Awesome! I have a collection of crystal unicorns, fantasy or not - I love them. Love reading all these great writes. |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Thanks for liking this.It feels like centuries ago when I wrote this.I just bought the DVD of "Legend" last week,so I suppose that had something to do with inspiring me to submit this. Peace,unicorn lovers,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your writing period of this was when my children were younger, and collecting unicorns was one of their things "to do"...I don't know how many unicorns I would touch, looking for treasures for them...but I do recall, and you brought back some tender memories, Geoffrey...thank you... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Geoffrey, this is such a beautiful piece. I too love unicorns..and this is a keeper poet sir! Fantastic imagery..just fantastic! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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