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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-04-03 02:00 PM

Tommorrow, Today

Good love, nice house,
Just when everything seems so fine.
It just hits me, that I'm confined
Within four walls.

I'm living outside
The harshness of the world,
An egg under lights
Of protection and care.

I only see through
A small lid of a teapot.
Everything else
Seems to so big
That I can't not comprehend.

I never get to know
Many people
From different backgrounds.
Always depend on
My family for support.

I'm a spoil child,
Soon become a woman.
Everyday, I count my blessing,
Wishing today will be forever.

Forever have parents
Guide through each
Event of life.
What a dream that
Many have also think of.

Everyday, I count my blessing,
Wishing today will be forever,
But tommorrow will never
Be today again.

But tommorrow will never
Be today again...

(c)April 3, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (04-03-2003 02:02 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-04-03 02:18 PM

Eliza - the world is an exciting place. Come out of your teapot and explore! Enjoyed this write. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-04-03 09:00 PM

The world is what you make it. I am sure you are not going to confine yourselves to those four walls forever. Good job on the poem. Joyce

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

3 posted 2003-04-05 05:56 PM

Very interesting - all your writes are indeed enjoyable.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-04-09 02:36 PM

OhEliza~

I just love this litle snippet of thought~

'I only see through
A small lid of a teapot'
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

5 posted 2003-04-10 12:57 PM

Dear Eliza, I do share your sentiments... The world is so big and sometimes it seems alittle scary... But think about it, many of our fellow poets can share their wisdom, so that's a big source of confort ^_^

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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