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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-04-02 11:12 AM


White Flower Lay on Mountain Green

White flowers lay on mountain green,
Softly teased by the caressing wind.
Oh did I see the miracles of summer snow-
As I breath I can feel the petals are falling
From an unseen sky of mysterious light.

(c) April 1, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-04-02 11:25 AM


Very enjoyable write.  You are prolific today.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2003-04-02 12:15 PM


Eliza~
You just pick me up and blow me away with the beauty of your thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2003-04-02 05:18 PM


Eliza:  I know I commented on this by e-mail but it is so beautiful I had to come here and read it again!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-04-05 05:48 PM


Always gentle words - just so nice.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2005-06-24 01:52 PM



Cause I miss you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2005-06-25 03:45 PM


glad this came back up
junemac
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7 posted 2005-06-28 03:38 PM


Eliza this is so pretty. I enjoyed it very much
Hugs June x

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